Showing posts with label formal writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label formal writing. Show all posts

Friday, March 10 | Formal Writing Due

ANNOUNCEMENTS
  • Molly's P-Block will be joining Mike's today.
  • Students should be setting up a writing conference with Addie and Heather this week to discuss revisions and next steps for their formal writing
  • Formal Writing Final Drafts are due TODAY!

DO NOW:
  • Open your formal writing.
  • Read through the feedback comments and determine your next steps. 
  • Document your goal for today. What needs to be completed by the end of class today to have a professional, effectively communicated formal writing component?

STUDIO TIME | WRITING
  • Following the studio time norms set by your group, spend the class period today finalizing your formal writing.

TICKET OUT:
  • Submit your formal writing to G. Classroom. 
  • Show your advisor that you have submitted it. 

Thursday, March 9 | Peer Feedback Round 2

ANNOUNCEMENTS
  • Students should be setting up a writing conference with Addie and Heather this week to discuss revisions and next steps for their formal writing
  • Formal Writing Final Drafts are due THIS FRIDAY!

Advisor Prep:
  • Create new partners for today's feedback conferences
  • Reflect on Tuesday's process and be ready to discuss with your group in an efficient manner today. It might be best to have a flexible idea of a revised process (example). 


DO NOW: PREPARING TO CONFERENCE [3 min]
  • Find the your partner (per your advisor) and find a space in the room you can think and talk with minimal disruption and distraction.
  • Share your formal writing (no matter how rough) with each other in suggesting mode.

GROUP FEEDBACK | PREPARE FOR CONFERENCING TODAY [15 min]
  • Independently review the student guide from Tuesday.
  • VERY brief Keep. Add. Change. as a group (10 min max)
    • What went well on Tuesday?
    • What do you think was missing from the conversation/process?
    • What would you like to change about the process? How?
  • Keeping consistent with the S.T.A.R. process while considering the feedback, create a protocol that will work best for your group today. Document this in a space that everyone can see during conferencing. 

    PEER FEEDBACK | ROUND 2 [50 min]
    • Following the revised protocol your group determined, provide feedback to your partner on their formal writing. (This should take the majority of the hour if you are being thoughtful and intentional with your feedback)
    • Review the feedback you received. Ask your partner questions as necessary. 
    • Create a goal for tonight and tomorrow based on the feedback you received. 
    TICKET OUT [5 min]
    • Share out your next steps for revisions.

    Wednesday, March 8 | Revision Day

    ANNOUNCEMENTS
    • Students should be setting up a writing conference with Addie and Heather this week to discuss revisions and next steps for their formal writing
    • Formal Writing Final Drafts are due THIS FRIDAY!

    DO NOW: SURVEYS [5 min]
    Please complete the following surveys: Commitment Issues and Passions

    DO NEXT [5 min]
    • Open your formal writing.
    • Read through the feedback comments and determine your next steps. 
    • Document your goal for today. What needs to be completed by the end of class today to have a professional, effectively communicated formal writing component by Friday?

    STUDIO TIME | WRITING [40 min]
    • Following the studio time norms set by your group, spend the class period today finalizing your formal writing.
    TICKET OUT [10 min]
    • What is 1 area of your writing that you made revisions to today? 
    • What is 1 area that you would value feedback on tomorrow?

    Tuesday, March 7 | Peer Feedback

    WEEK PREVIEW

    • Tuesday: Peer feedback
    • Wednesday: Revision day (using the feedback from Tuesday)
    • Thursday: Round 2 of peer feedback
    • Friday: Revision day. Final Drafts due today! 

    Advisor Prep Notes: 
    Please create random pairings of your P-Block students.
    Please review the S.T.A.R. guide from last Friday's personal statement PD (with focus on 5-8)
    Each student needs 1 copy of this student-friendly S.T.A.R. guide




    ANNOUNCEMENTS

    • Students should be setting up a writing conference with Addie and Heather this week to discuss revisions and next steps for their formal writing
    • Formal Writing Final Drafts are due THIS FRIDAY!

    DO NOW: PREPARING TO CONFERENCE [3 min]
    • Find the your partner (per your advisor) and find a space in the room you can think and talk with minimal disruption and distraction.
    • Share your formal writing (no matter how rough) with each other in suggesting mode. (If you currently don't have assess, please unsubmit it from G. Classroom. Do not email teachers to have it returned)

    INTRODUCE S.T.A.R. PROCESS [7 min]
    • Review the student guide and today's process together as a group. 
      • What questions do you have?
      • What do you think will be valuable about this process?
      • What suggestions do you have for giving good quality feedback?

    PEER CONFERENCING | FEEDBACK [45 min]
    1. Read through the entire paper without making any comments or suggestions. This is to get the essence for the argument in its entirety.
    2. S- Substitution. Reread your partner's writing. This time, focus on specific words. Which ones need to be replaced by stronger words? Make comments on these words with suggestions for different words.
    3. T- Take things out, A- Add. Reread the writing for the 3rd time. Focus this time on what fits, what doesn't fit, and what you want to know more about. Suggest deleting sections that seem to not fit, or offer suggestions about what to add so it does make sense. 
    4. R- Rearrange. Read your partner's writing for the 4th and final time. This time you are looking for FLOW. Does the order of the paragraphs make sense? Are the sentences in an order that they flow into each other?
    5. Writers should then review the feedback they have received and ask clarifying questions as needed. 
    6. Writers will make a revision plan for tonight and tomorrow based on the feedback they received. 
    **Writing is circular! Today this process was structured for you. On Thursday, we will be doing this again, but without the rigidity of this specific process. The intent was to have you intentionally, fully, and thoughtfully review a peer's piece of writing at multiple levels.


    TICKET OUT (to advisory at 11:00)
    • 1 valuable piece of feedback you received or 1 immediate next step

    Monday, February 27 | Formal Writing Drafts

    ANNOUNCEMENTS:

    • Draft of your formal writing component will be due THURSDAY (March 2nd). The deadline for your final draft is tentatively set for Friday, March 10. 


    DO NOW (If you haven't done so already- 89 of you haven't) : THESIS STATEMENT [4 min]
    In G. Classroom, answer the Thesis statement question. You can always go back and revise it, so please write at least a draft of what you are thinking.


    DO NEXT: PREPARE YOURSELF FOR A DAY OF WRITING [3 min]
    Open your formal writing document. Open the Humanities Research Paper Resources site.  Consider the expectations laid out on the site and the current status of your formal writing component. Document your SMART goal for today.

    RESEARCH MODEL [3 min each]

    STUDIO TIME | ESSAY DRAFT 
    Please use your time today to take meaningful and productive steps towards a solid draft of your essay. Use this time to conference with your advisor, revise your thesis statement, solidify your arguments based on your thesis, or write your introduction (it is may be best to leave your conclusion until last).
    • Share out your writing goal for today.
    • Use your habits of self-discipline and innovation to complete your goal.
    • Reflect on what you accomplished today and your next steps for home learning
    TICKET OUT: When will you carve out time tomorrow to complete at least 30 minutes of writing? What will that 30 min involve (goal for the writing period)? 

    Friday, February 24 | Formal Writing Drafts

    ANNOUNCEMENTS:

    • Due to the schedule this week and next, the draft of your formal writing component will be due NEXT THURSDAY (March 2nd). The deadline for your final draft is tentatively set for Friday, March 10. 
    • Addie and Heather will be doing workshops over the next week. They will be meeting with Freshmen today at 10:15. Please stay tuned for a complete schedule. 


    DO NOW: THESIS STATEMENT [4 min]
    In G. Classroom, answer the Thesis statement question. You can always go back and revise it, so please write at least a draft of what you are thinking.


    DO NEXT: PREPARE YOURSELF FOR A DAY OF WRITING [3 min]
    Open your formal writing document. Open the Humanities Research Paper Resources site.  Consider the expectations laid out on the site and the current status of your formal writing component. Document your SMART goal for today.

    RESEARCH MODEL [3 min each]

    10:15 Freshmen to the Cafeteria for a Thesis Statement workshop.

    STUDIO TIME | ESSAY DRAFT 
    Please use your time today to take meaningful and productive steps towards a solid draft of your essay. Use this time to conference with your advisor, revise your thesis statement, solidify your arguments based on your thesis, or write your introduction (it is may be best to leave your conclusion until last).
    • Share out your writing goal for today.
    • Use your habits of self-discipline and innovation to complete your goal.
    • Reflect on what you accomplished today and your next steps for home learning
    TICKET OUT: What is 1 next step you need to accomplish before coming into P-Block Monday?

    Tuesday, February 21 | Essay Planning

    Monday, October 10 | Essay Planning


    Deadlines:
    • Annotated bibs: Past Due (Last Friday)
    • Formal writing drafts: Due Friday
    • Final Drafts: Due next Thursday

    DO NOW: Complete the interest survey for a fellow student's research. 


    DO NEXT: DEFINE SYNTHESIS [2 min]
    On a sticky note or other piece of paper, define synthesis in your own words.

    GATHERING: CONSTRUCT MEANING [10 min]
    As a group, create a share definition of the word "synthesis" and discuss patterns. How can you take the pieces of knowledge, argument, and perspective that you gained through research and synthesize it for a thesis?

    RESEARCH MODELS [3 min each]

    REVIEW FORMAL WRITING COMPONENT | RESEARCH PAPER [5 min]
    • All IDEAS Block students are required to write a formal research paper. If you wish to construct an essay other than a research paper, you must setup an appointment with Addie for approval. Even if you have not gotten approval, you can begin the planning process today.
    • Many think a research paper is merely an essay in which they define a topic. For example, they might research Web2.0 tools such as blogs then proceed to define what a blog is, who invented the blog, who uses a blog and why. This is true, but only in part. The main function or purpose of the research paper is to first analyze the topic (define Web2.0 tools and describe how they impact society) and second construct an argument in regards to the topic (Web2.0 tools turn the average writer into a true scholar with publication of writing).



    There are four main elements to a research paper.


    1. Introduction
    2. Definition: The definition paragraph introduces your audience to your interpretation of the topic. This paragraph will answer the majority of the closed questions you researched, but it also needs to include your personal understanding of the topic. For example, while there is a specific definition of empathy, how we demonstrate empathy as individuals varies greatly, which is open to interpretation.
    3. Argument: This is the portion of your essay in which you will synthesize your argument using academic research. Remember that an innovative argument not only recognizes the conversations about the topic via academic research, but also adds to the conversation by offering new insight not yet considered.
    4. Conclusion: Restate thesis. Restate argument. Restate purpose. Sounds simple. It is not. Remember that restate actually means that you have already provided your readers with this information once. While it is important to do so again to remind them of what your paper was about, you are actually doing so in a new way, not in fact restating. Restating is redundant and boring to your readers.



    STUDIO TIME | ESSAY PLANNING [10:20-11:10]
    Begin the planning stage of your essay by creating a visual outline. This can be done in several ways.

    classic notes.jpg
    The Traditional Method: Effective for those students who like to organize their ideas using a strict structure. (Dan’s favorite)



    image notes.jpg
    The Doodle Method: Effective for those students who like to use images, symbols, text (doodles!) to assemble their ideas. Notice in this Pinterest example, the argument of the essay is in large letters at the bottom: “We use stories to make sense of and predict our lives.” (Addie’s favorite)



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    Sticky Notes: Effective for those students who like to move, manipulate, re-organize their ideas. (Beckah’s favorite)


    CLOSING: SHARE OUT [11:10-11:15]

    What is the argument?

    Monday, October 10 | Essay Planning

    *FRESHMEN: Freshmen are still required to send their annotated bibliography to Addie. If you have not done so, please complete your annotations today and send immediately. This week you will continue your work with the annotated bibliography by adding an introduction and conclusion. These new extensions are due Friday, October 21, 2016.


    *NON-FRESHMEN: All IDEAS Block students (except freshmen this semester) are required to write a formal research paper. If you wish to construct an essay other than a research paper, you must setup an appointment with Addie for approval. Even if you have not gotten approval, you can begin the planning process today.


    Define synthesis. As a do now, consider sketching the definition of the word "synthesis" and discussing patterns. How can you take the pieces of knowledge, argument, and perspective that you gained through research and synthesize it for a thesis? Try printing out your annotated bibliography and cutting it into pieces, categorizing, connecting, asking yourself "So what?" ...synthesizing.


    The Formal Writing Component | Research Paper

    Many think a research paper is merely an essay in which they define a topic. For example, they might research Web2.0 tools such as blogs then proceed to define what a blog is, who invented the blog, who uses a blog and why. This is true, but only in part. The main function or purpose of the research paper is to first analyze the topic (define Web2.0 tools and describe how they impact society) and second construct an argument in regards to the topic (Web2.0 tools turn the average writer into a true scholar with publication of writing).

    There are four main elements to a research paper.
    • Introduction
    • Definition: The definition paragraph introduces your audience to your interpretation of the topic. This paragraph will answer the majority of the closed questions you researched, but it also needs to include your personal understanding of the topic. For example, while there is a specific definition of empathy, how we demonstrate empathy as individuals varies greatly, which is open to interpretation.
    • Argument: This is the portion of your essay in which you will synthesize your argument using academic research. Remember that an innovative argument not only recognizes the conversations about the topic via academic research, but also adds to the conversation by offering new insight not yet considered. 
    • Conclusion: Restate thesis. Restate argument. Restate purpose. Sounds simple. It is not. Remember that restate actually means that you have already provided your readers with this information once. While it is important to do so again to remind them of what your paper was about, you are actually doing so in a new way, not in fact restating. Restating is redundant and boring to your readers. 

    Begin the planning stage of your essay by creating a visual outline. This can be done in several ways.

    The Traditional Method: Effective for those students who like to organize their ideas using a strict structure. (Dan’s favorite)






    The Doodle Method: Effective for those students who like to use images, symbols, text (doodles!) to assemble their ideas. Notice in this Pinterest example, the argument of the essay is in large letters at the bottom: “We use stories to make sense of and predict our lives.” (Addie’s favorite)




    Sticky Notes: Effective for those students who like to move, manipulate, re-organize their ideas. (Beckah’s favorite)




    Share Out: What is the argument?